First Method
- Write a novel.
- Locate the most important scene.
- Locate the most important moment of the scene.
- Delete everything else.
Second Method
- Just write that most important moment.
I recommend the second method, and I say this as someone who has written a truckload of flash fiction. Of course, a truckload of flash fiction is like a truckload of ear buds–mostly packaging. Still.
Here’s an example, which I am writing on the spur of the moment. Ear buds. Let’s start with ear buds. Makes me think about my daughter when she was a teen and my grandson when he was a teen. So let’s have a teen. Could do a parent or grandparent, but let’s have a teen. The teen is wearing ear buds. Why? Duh–to listen to music. Why? “Just because” isn’t a story, so let’s give him/her a reason. Okay, I’m going to make this a boy. He’s drowning out his environment. So let’s call the piece Soundtrack
SOUNDTRACK
I tuck the ear buds in as tight as they’ll go. The lead singer screams, the guitars wail. One day, I’ll have a growth spurt, and then it’ll be Dad. For now, it’s the singer, the guitars and my Mom.
So there you have it: a few lines with a story behind it and a story leading from it, encapsulated in a moment. Flash.
WRITING PROMPT: Go thou and do likewise.
MA
Tags: flash fiction, postcard fiction
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LOL. I like your methods for flash fiction.
Good story, too!!
For the record, I wasn’t drowning my environment so much as my own inner dialogue. And I’ve found, recently, that earbuds are excellent in cold weather when you don’t like earmuffs, because they keep the wind out of your poor little inner ear.

Sara Deurell would love to share..The Little Rough Draft That Could
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Wow! So that’s what flash fiction is. I have a gift for condensing things but I’m not sure I could condense anything down that far!
Sharon Reece would love to share..Comments from Readers
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Some definitions of Flash extend the length to 500 words, depending on what on-line site you go by. Even at that, it is a trial to get all the elements: character definition, a sense of purpose, hook, line and sinker crammed into one. I like to do Short-Shorts, and extended Flash though, because you get just enough, if barely enough, room to express a full story. That’s good practice, and web-zines love them. You end up having to infer a good deal of the story to smash it together sometimes. Shorter flash is a bit like Haiku poesy, painting a scene, idea, or personality, but in prose. There are may sites that specialize in Postcard Flash though, and it can be fun to do.








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