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It’s the first of the month, so I have a new Hot Flash.

The contest is still running to promote FORCE OF HABIT. If you want to see an example of “your name in a story”, click on the “By the Book” link to see last year’s prize.

What are the prizes?

  • a copy of EEL’S REVERENCE (eBook)
  • a copy of FORCE OF HABIT (eBook)
  • a copy of LONNIE, ME AND THE HOUND OF HELL (eBook)
  • a copy of THE KING OF CHEROKEE CREEK (eBook)
  • a copy of MA’S MONTHLY HOT FLASHES: 2002-2007 (eBook)
  • a MomGoth’s Sweet Little Baby Angels pin
  • the name of your choice in the story I write to promote my next eBook release, SIDESHOW IN THE CENTER RING. Holly Jahangiri, who won this in the last contest, called her appearance in “By the Book“, “Best. Prize. Ever.”

How do you win?

  • leave a comment on this or any other blog on which I post, saying you’re entering the contest. One entry for each post on which you comment.
  • If you’ve already bought and read one or more of my books, write a review (or reviews) and leave a comment on this blog linking to the review(s). One entry for each review.
  • Mention the contest on your blog and your social media networks (Twitter, Facebook, Google+, whatever) and leave a comment on this blog saying so. One entry for every place you spread the word.

Entries will be numbered and winners chosen by Random Number Selector. First entry drawn gets first choice of prizes and so on.

How long does it run?

Until midnight EST October 31.

Quite a few entries already, so get your name into the pot!

WRITING PROMPT: What would induce your main character to enter a contest? What kind of contest?

MA

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Here is another bitty bit from my new release, a cop/sf/farce. In this scene, Bel wakes to find her kidnapper sending away someone Bel had hoped to use to send a message to her friends. “Ven” is a gender-neutral replacement for Mr., Mrs., Miss and Ms.

He bolted the door and leaned against it, listening to the woman’s heavy footsteps easing down the stairs. A ribbon several shades darker than his sky-blue eyes dangled from his hand.

When the woman had gone, he turned to Bel and sketched a bow.

“Connell Morgan,” he said. “At your service.”

Bel frowned what she hoped was a terrible frown and said, “You’ll regret this!”

Morgan smiled and went to one knee next to Bel’s divan. “No, I won’t,” he assured her. “How’s the head?”

“It hurts.”

“Thirsty?”

“Among other things.”

Morgan lifted Bel into a sitting position. He fetched a glass of buff-colored liquid from the table.

“Drink some of this.”

“What is it?”

“A local concoction. Relieves pain, promotes healing. The Wandering Tribes use it, and it seems to work.”

Morgan put the glass into Bel’s bound hands. She considered dashing the liquid in his face but, although such an action would be dramatic, and would make a stirring illustration in an action comic, she realized it would also be extremely stupid.

So she drank it, instead. It tasted like a vanilla malted with a kick to it.

“Now, just lean back and let it take effect,” Morgan said. He took the glass back to the table, out of the reach of someone who might possibly want to use it as a weapon.

He looked down at the blue ribbon he still held. “This is yours, isn’t it?” He tied it in Bel’s hair. “It becomes you. Brings out the gold in your eyes.”

He sat next to Bel on the divan. Very next.

Bel absent-mindedly dug an elbow into his ribs until he moved away.

“Was I crowding you? Do forgive me.”

The pain in Bel’s head subsided. “What’s your name again?”

“Connell Morgan. My friends call me Connell. I want you to call me Connell, because I want you to be my friend.” He turned on the smile. “And you? I mean, I know who you are, but what is your name?”

“My name is Isobel Enid Schuster. My friends call me Bel. I want you to call me Ven Schuster, because I want you to untie me, unlock the door, and drop dead.”

“I sense a certain amount of hostility,” said Morgan, as if this were an insight.

“That’s coming from me, that hostility you sense,” said Bel. “People slamming my head upside a wall tend to bring out the worst in me.”

“Now, now, my dear young woman,” Connell protested, growing somewhat defensive. “An accident, I assure you. I only wanted to prevent your bashing my head in with a club. You should have let go of it. It was more your fault than mine you were hurt, you know. I never meant for you to hit the wall; it was purely an unhappy chance. You can hardly hold me responsible for the vagaries of Fate, can you?”

Bel didn’t answer.

“Well, can you?” Morgan’s eyes opened wide with boyish innocence.

Bel knew that look well from the classroom. It was the sure sign of a scoundrel.

“Tell me why,” Bel said at last. “Why? A woman who’s just had her money belt snatched is a poor prospect for robbery. And, if you planned to commit a crime against my person, you wouldn’t have carried me off to tend my wounds.”

“I had no intention of committing a crime against your person,” said Connell. “Not my style of thing at all. Good God, what do you take me for?”

“Untie me and give me back my club and I’ll tell you.”

FORCE OF HABIT is available for a mere $2.99 at Amazon for Kindle, at Barnes & Noble for Nook, and in many fine electronic formats at Smashwords and OmniLit. Your patronage is much appreciated. Don’t forget to enter the contest to win this or another of my eBooks, a MomGoth’s Sweet Little Baby Angels pin or your name in a short story.

WRITING PROMPT: What crime would your villain NEVER commit?

MA

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The short story I wrote to go along with FORCE OF HABIT will be available soon. “By the Book” is set on Llannonn, the planet where most of the action in FOH takes place, and features Pel Darzin, one of the main characters in FOH. It also contains a character named Holly Jahangiri, Holly being the commenter who won the right to have her name in the story in my last contest, a character named Kurt Maxxon, the choice of Karen Overturf, who commented on every single appearance I made on my EEL’S REVERENCE blog book tour, and a character named Devra Langsam, named after the fanfic maven in whose fanzine, Masiform D, the Star Trek story upon which FOH is loosely based, appeared.

You can find a link to my current contest in the sidebar over there or on the links up there just under the blog banner.

Meanwhile, I’m posting today at Fatal Foodies, on the topic of miso.

WRITING PROMPT: Open a phone book or the newspaper or hit a web site at random and pick a random name. What kind of character would you create, beginning with the name alone (or, if your source includes the person’s profession, the name and business)?

MA

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Today’s sample is from MY NEW BOOK, FORCE OF HABIT — MUCH REJOICING!!1!

In this scene Bel Schuster, who has gone off-limits and gotten herself kidnapped by a criminal who thinks she’s a VIP he can trade for amnesty, has called her co-worker, Tetra Petrie. Tetra Petrie, a native of the planet Gilhoo, has trained herself to talk without using contractions because she observed that humans implicitly trust people who don’t use contractions. Quatro is her brother. Captain Joan Fazzaria is known as “Jinx” because bad luck trails her like magnetic mines after a starship. Harry Chestney is all about action. Wotan Hessaphess is all about free drinks. Donna Meichi is the communications officer. It’s that kind of book.

The connection ended.

 Jinx raised Donna Meichi. “Any luck locating the call’s origin?”

 ”Negative, Captain. It came from Council City, but the call was too brief to get a bead on.”

 ”Thank you, Ven Meichi. We expect another such call. Stand by to boost sensor power and engage locus lock-on.”

 ”Yes, Captain.”

 Silence fell in Conference Room B15.

 After a moment, Jinx prompted them. “Anyone?”

 ”Peanut butter,” said Hessaphess. “On her star charts.”

 ”On the contrary,” said Quatro. His recent foray into duplicity had whetted in him a hitherto unsuspected appetite for it. “She was sending us a somewhat heavyhanded message saying she’s in trouble.”

 ”We know she’s in trouble,” the Captain pointed out gently. “If we hadn’t known it already, her calling from offlimits would have given us a subtle clue, don’t you think? Not to mention the fairly straightforward text of her prepared statement and the presence of an apparent captor.”

 Quatro’s face took on a pinched look, the corners of his mouth turned sharply down, which Tetra knew meant he had been touched on the raw.

 ”Captain,” she said, “I believe Quatro is correct. We are missing a subtlety which he has observed. Since it is obvious Ven Schuster is in trouble, why did she call our attention to an overlying peculiarity about the call?”

 ”Peanut butter,” Hessaphess muttered, and chuckled.

 Quatro nodded. “She wanted us to look more closely at her prepared statement,” he said, his confidence restored. “Depend upon it, there’s a message hidden there.”

 ”Let’s all get out our decoder rings,” said Hessaphess.

 Jinx simply turned to him, saying nothing, but drumming the tips of her bitten nails on the table.

 He subsided.

 ”May I ask the computer to give us transcriptions?” Tetra’s finger rested on the print button.

 ”Excellent idea,” said Fazzaria.

 ”Captain,” said Chestney. “Request permission to call up a Security squad to transfer to Ven Schuster’s locus as soon as it’s determined. We could have her liberated and back aboard ship before the natives know she’s raised us.”

 ”Permission denied,” said Jinx. “Ven Chestney, you will oblige me by suppressing your desire to storm the fortress before we’ve established the existence of one.”

 Harry ducked his head with the half-flattered chagrin of one certain everybody else secretly admired his impetuosity.

 When each member of the Crisis Team had a copy of the contact transcript, Tetra said, “I believe Quatro is right. Ven Schuster wanted us to examine the prepared statement more closely. That is why she signed it as she did, and why she included the signature with a verbal transmission. ‘I.S.’ Her initials, of course, and ‘Rosettastone,’ to indicate a code. And that,” she said to the Captain with a dizzying rush of relief, “is why she called me, specifically. Because I am faculty sponsor of the Rosettastones, and would be the person most likely to recognize the indication.”

 ”She reckoned without me,” said Quatro.

 ”Thank you, Mr. Bond,” said Tetra, but Quatro was too engrossed in the problem to hear her.

 ”She wouldn’t have had time to come up with something elaborate,” said Dr. Frazni. “Especially if, as she says in the text, she was ‘knocked silly.’ I’m inclined to believe the words of the text are, on the surface, accurate. After all, her captor would know if they weren’t.”

 ”Good thinking,” said Jinx. “The word choice sounds a little stilted, though. ‘Now the wonderful exotic little vacation’s exploded.’ ‘Exploded’? ‘Identity nears nonexistence’?”

 Tetra took a mechanical pencil from the pocket of her sweatpants and marked some of the message’s letters. “Well, I will be a monkey’s uncle,” she said. “You have hit upon the key, Captain.”

 ”I have?”

 ”She chose her words partly for their surface accuracy, but also for their initial letters.” Tetra read from her paper, “‘Ten twelve blocks from Inn.’ Ven Schuster has not only told us what happened to her, but her general location. She is within a ten-to-twelve-block radius from Jok’rel’s.” Jinx raised ComSpec Meichi again and told her how far too narrow her next scan.

 ”Shall I collect a squad now, Captain?” Chestney halfrose.

 ”When I want you to collect a squad,” said the Captain, “I’ll ask you to collect a squad. I want to know where Schuster is. I may not be able to use the information, but I want to have it. In the meantime, we need to clear and secure the Inn.”

 ”We’re bowing to the Stokk’s demands?”

 ”I don’t see why we shouldn’t,” said Jinx, “since he demands we do what we were about to do anyway.”

 ”He does?”

 ”In effect. Ven Petrie, prepare to transfer to Jok’rel’s. I’ll have Faline Mahoud cut a credit voucher for… How much do you estimate twelve hours of our custom would have been worth? Anyone?”

 Quatro scratched figures on his transcript. “Twelve in the party…less one, because Hessaphess never spends his own money…times twelve hours…times what Tetra spent on Riga…less two hours and fifteen minutes…. Approximately 340 credit units, Captain.”

 ”Three hun–” She cocked an eye at Tetra.

 ”Moderate, Captain,” Tetra said. “My expenditure on Riga was, as ever, moderate.”

 Jinx raised Commissariat Faline Mahoud. “Cut me a credit voucher payable to Jok’rel’s Traveler’s Rest Inn,” she said. “For 340…. Better make it an even 350 credit units. Send it to locus B15 for signature and dispersal.”

 ”Yes, Captain.”

 ”And prepare the paymaster to deduct it, five credits per packet, from Wotan Hessaphess’ pay.”

FORCE OF HABIT is available for a mere $2.99 in many fine electronic formats at Smashwords and OmniLit. Your patronage is much appreciated. Don’t forget to enter the contest to win this or another of my eBooks, a MomGoth’s Sweet Little Baby Angels pin or your name in a short story.

WRITING PROMPT: Would your main character be good as solving a cryptogram? Why or why not?

MA

 

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RELEASE DAY FOR FORCE OF HABIT

And it’s live and kicking at Smashwords, with Kindle, OmniLit and possibly print to follow.

Here’s a link to the release page with a description.

Here’s a link to the first chapter.

Here’s another sample.

Here’s a link to a post about turning fanfic into original fiction.

Here’s one about the roots of this novel in Star Trek (TOS) fan fiction.

Here’s a link to a post about cross-genres and mash-ups relative to FORCE OF HABIT.

Want a free copy? Enter the contest to win one of five eBooks, a Sweet Little Baby Angels pin or your name in a forthcoming story. Or offer to host me as a guest on your blog. Or request a review copy of any of my books.

WRITING PROMPT: A character gets so excited about something, he/she forgets to do something he/she does every day.

MA

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The release date for my sf/cop/farce novel FORCE OF HABIT approacheth, and I’m running a contest.

What are the prizes?

  • a copy of EEL’S REVERENCE (eBook)
  • a copy of FORCE OF HABIT (eBook)
  • a copy of LONNIE, ME AND THE HOUND OF HELL (eBook)
  • a copy of THE KING OF CHEROKEE CREEK (eBook)
  • a copy of MA’S MONTHLY HOT FLASHES: 2002-2007 (eBook)
  • a MomGoth’s Sweet Little Baby Angels pin
  • the name of your choice in the story I write to promote my next eBook release, SIDESHOW IN THE CENTER RING. Holly Jahangiri, who won this in the last contest, called it, “Best. Prize. Ever.”

How do you win?

  • leave a comment on this or any other blog on which I post, saying you’re entering the contest. One entry for each post on which you comment.
  • If you’ve already bought and read one or more of my books, write a review (or reviews) and leave a comment on this blog linking to the review(s). One entry for each review.
  • Mention the contest on your blog and your social media networks (Twitter, Facebook, Google+, whatever) and leave a comment on this blog saying so. One entry for every place you spread the word.

Entries will be numbered and winners chosen by Random Number Selector. First entry drawn gets first choice of prizes and so on.

How long does it run?

From today until midnight EST October 31.

Ready. Set. GO!

WRITING PROMPT: A character wins a prize he or she really doesn’t want but can’t refuse.

MA

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I’m sure I’ve written about this before, but I can’t find the post, so Imma write about it again.

Indirection is the art of showing something without showing it directly. Some people don’t get it, but I get a kick out of it. I’m not as good at it as Elizabeth Peters is, but I try–I try.

Here’s an example from my soon-to-be-released novel, FORCE OF HABIT, in which a couple of Stokk villains are threatening Our Hero, Bel, and her kidnapper, Connell Morgan.

First, you have to set it up.

“Ligniss is very high-strung,” said Pron. “Show them your knuckles, Ligniss.”

The apricot Stokk raised his fists. They weren’t overly large, but they seemed to be constructed of some material that could withstand the test of time.

“Notice the knuckles,” said Pron. “How sharply knobby they are. He cracks them, you see. Against parts of people’s bodies, you see.”

Then you move things into place.

“Maybe he’s hard of hearing, Ligniss. Maybe you’d better stand a little closer to him. Then, if we have to tell him again, we’ll be sure he listens.”

Ligniss sat down beside Morgan and Pron took his place in front of the door.

Then you do the pay-off.

“Excuse me,” Morgan said.

Ligniss cracked his knuckles.

Morgan rubbed the dent on the side of his head and subsided.

So there you have it: indirection. What can I say? It amuses me.

WRITING PROMPT: Write a scene in which what happens is not told but only implied by its effects.

MA

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The new book is due out in May. I’ve sent in an acceptable final draft, now waiting for Publisher’s edits/proof copy. It’s a cop/sf/farce.

When Bel Schuster goes off limits on the planet Llannonn, all she wants is a breath of fresh air. Instead, she’s kidnapped by a Terran criminal who mistakes her for someone worth a ransom. Gangsters from yet another planet, local law enforcement and highly placed political operatives all get into the act, as a tangle of misunderstanding, miscommunication and mistaken identity land Bel in court, facing what passes for a legal system on Llannonn.

“Remember,” Hessaphess said, “you can rent a room, you can swim, you can zero-gee, you can spend all twelve hours in the bar; but you can’t, under any circumstances, leave the Inn. No exceptions, this means YOU. Understood?”

Everybody nodded. Everybody headed for the bar.

“Ven Hessaphess,” said Bel, putting a hand on one of his right elbows.

“No exceptions,” he repeated.

“No, of course not, certainly not, why, what a thought,” said Bel. “I only wanted to ask if I could buy you a drink.”

“Why?”

“What do you care?”

Wotan Hessaphess had never turned down a free drink in his life. He made his usual acceptance speech: “I’d love it, but I left my moneybelt in my other tunic, so…”

“So you can’t buy a round in return. I understand. Don’t think a thing of it. Listen, I’ve got specie burning a hole in my pedal pushers and nothing much to spend it on. Let’s have a bottle or two, my treat.”

Hessaphess didn’t mind if he did.

It didn’t take Bel long to realize a barrel or two wouldn’t have made any difference. The Engineer became elevated, yes, and told tall tales of engines he had known, interrupting himself with spirited attempts at singing “A Mighty Fortress Is Our God,” improvising where memory failed, but he never forgot an order, and he never compromised.

Bel finally gave up. She bought him a final bottle and moved (rather unsteadily) to a dim and distant table, there to brood over the illustrated brochures from the rack in the lobby.

WRITING PROMPT: Is there any place your character considers or has been told is off-limits? Under what circumstances would he/she violate that taboo?

MA

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My upcoming sf/cop/farce novel, FORCE OF HABIT, began as a Star Trek (TOS) fanfic story, published in Devra Langsam’s fanzine, MasiformD. Fanfic, in case you don’t know, is fiction written by fans, using the characters and/or world of a copyrighted work.

Fanfic can be placed on a continuum running from “exactly like an episode the writer didn’t write” to “I’m wearing my mommy’s high heels and I am the STAR”. Mine was somewhere in the middle, leaning slightly to my mommy’s high heels.

Now, taking a piece of fanfic and turning it into original fiction is called filing off the serial numbers. And THAT can fall on a continuum running from “same car, no serial number” (changing all the names) to “run that sucker through a chop shop and give it a paint job” (keep the basic plot and your own characters and change as much of the rest as possible). Mine is so close to the chop-shop end, its origins would probably be undetectable to anyone who didn’t know. Sometimes I forget, myself.

Flash is flash fiction, occasionally defined as up to 2,000 words, but more often 1,000, 500, 100 or fewer (fewer, children–not “less”–”fewer”). I write it (see the Hot Flashes tab above). Love it.

Flash is also the design of a tattoo. If you go into a tattoo parlor, you can look through books of flash to pick the tattoo you want. I have no tattoos, because I have a very low pain threshold, but I love tattoos. I get fake ones sometimes. I just joined Second Life, and my avatar is going to get some. Free, of course, because, you know, it’s me. People with tattoos are usually good guys in my books and stories, because most of the people I’ve met in real life with tattoos have been good people.

WRITING PROMPT: Does your main character have any tattoos? What does he/she think about them? Write a scene in which he/she meets someone with a lot of multi-color tattoos.

MA

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Only one today, because it consists of a series of posts from one blog. Camille LaGuire is posting a series of articles about Mary Sue. Fanfic fans, you know what a Mary Sue is, and you know who you are. (Me, too. Sekrit hanshaik) For those who don’t know, or want to pretend they don’t know, a Mary Sue is a character who represents the author in a piece of fan fiction. Okay, okay, everybody’s looking at the ceiling and whistling, pretending you don’t know what fanfic is.

  • fanfic – fan fiction
  • fan fiction – a story written by a fan of a book, television show or movie that uses the characters and situation set-up of that book, television show or movie as the basis of the fan’s work.
  • Mary Sue or Gary Stu – a character created by the fan to be the “special guest star” of the fan’s work AND who acts as a stand-in for the fan. The Mary Sue is usually either perfect or a goof-up who nevertheless saves the day. Although the term originally meant a wish-fulfillment so blatant it amounted to a violation of the characters and set-up the fan supposedly loves (Spock is my boyfriend. Edward jilted Bella for me.), purists have come to apply the term to any non-series character invented by the fan writer.
  • Mary Sue or Gary Stu – a story with such a character in it.

I’m particularly pleased with this series of posts because I used to write fanfic, back in the day. In fact, the next book Echelon Press is releasing from me, FORCE OF HABIT, began life as a piece of fanfic. I still have, not the original for FoH but the others in the series, stashed on my old abandoned blahg. Some people called those stories Mary Sues, but I think I gave the main characters enough action that they aren’t, really.

Fanfic, Mary Sue or not, is a lot of fun to write, and a good way to stretch writing muscles.

Whether you’re interested in the subject or not, I recommend Camille’s blog and this series of posts. She’s an excellent writer, and has a lot of insight into the writing process. Begin with this post and click on Newer Post until you catch up.

WRITING PROMPT: Start with a book, television show or movie you like and stir that pot: throw in a new character or situation that challenges the status quo. It’ll be fun. You know you want to.

MA

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