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Butterfly
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I love writing haiku. Here are a few I’ve done from time to time.

Photo by Marian Allen

Velvet butterflies,
Your feet are aglint with dew,
The sun’s displayed gems.

A swath of sapphire! –
My wanton parakeet flies
Among the sparrows.

Woods.  Distant rifles.  I smile
And walk on.  Then, at my feet,
The bloodied feather.

The sun, shattered on
The wind-faceted water,
Blinds the cold-eyed fish.

Alone, I listen
For the green voices of Spring.
I will not hear them.

On a snow-lapped day
Someone has brought violets
Tied with jade ribbon.

WRITING PROMPT: What would redeem a bad day for you? For any three of your characters?

MA

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Surviving the Book 90
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Sounds like a good title for a book or story, but it’s only the title of this post. Today, I’m giving a sneak preview of the Holly Jahangiri story I’m working on.

For those new to my blog, I ran a contest last year for the right to name a character in a short story I was working on to publicize a novel I had coming out from Echelon Press. An internet acquaintance, Holly Jahangiri, won, and wanted her name in the story. She ended up being the main character and heroine, and now lives as a character in my inner universe as well as living as an actual person in the real world. Her real self is even more awesome than the character, by the way.

I ran another contest this year, and dang if she didn’t win it AGAIN! I used a random number generator to pick the winner, so there was no fix. Unless…. Holly is pretty tech savvy…. You don’t think…. …Nah….

Well, that’s my quota of ellipses for a week, I think, so here is the sneak preview. This is a rough draft, so don’t judge it too harshly:

SURVIVING THE BOOK (sneak preview excerpt)
by Marian Allen

Assistant Librarian Holly Jahangiri continued entering data on her electronic desk pad when she heard the knock at her office door. Living Books required a great deal of data entry. Besides the dates they were checked out and the dates they checked themselves back in, there were all the expenses of pedicab or hovercab fares, costumes, makeup, throat lozenges, props and the occasional false mustache.

“Come in. Put it on the little table. Thank you.”

The door opened, but the figure in the doorway wasn’t Parlormaid Tambar Miznalia with the tea. This was a tall man, dark and dour.

Holly sprang to her feet and extended her hand.

“High Head Librarian Bistipherus Ownip! Welcome! I apologize for not greeting you at the front door. I didn’t expect you.”

“No,” he drawled. “You didn’t.”

“Does Head Librarian–”

“No, she doesn’t know I’m here. My business is with you.”

He entered the room and hooked thumbs with Holly. “Your parlourmaid greeted me if ‘greeted’ is the word for it.”

“Yes, I understand. We’d love to terminate her contract, but she always outbids us at the Employment Exchange. We just don’t have it in the budget to fire her. Did you tell her to bring more tea and an extra cup? Two extra cups? And fresh cake?”

Another man now stood in the doorway. This one was young and bright-eyed and shifted from one foot to another, grinning at Holly as if she were a high-fashion tunic designer. This must be the new Message. A job as Living Message was a great way to break into the Living Book business, and Living Message for the High Head Librarian was a position much sought after.

High Head Librarian Bistipherus Ownip used electronics as much as anyone else on the planet Llannonn, but he preferred to send messages by mouth. The notion so enchanted him, he defeated his purpose by accompanying them so he could hear them delivered.

Holly gestured for the men to be seated, but the High Head Librarian remained on his feet and gestured for his companion to stand.

“We won’t be here long. Proceed.”

The Message cleared his throat and said, “Three weeks ago, a small pleasure ship carrying a tour group of privately employed Living Books was lost at sea.”

“Excuse me,” Holly said, “but which sea? On Llannonn? How could it get lost in our little bitty seas?”

“Meadow of Flowers Sea,” the High Head Librarian said. “Apparently, it’s big enough. Continue.”

The Message cleared his throat again, and said, “Three weeks ago, a small pleasure ship carrying a tour group of privately employed Living Books was lost at sea. This being unlikely, the Meadow of Flowers policing force is sending an investigator to look into it and, if possible, recover the books. The policing force thought an expert on Living Books would be useful. Since you’ve worked successfully with the force before, you were chosen.”

Holly well remembered that adventure, and it was with reluctance that she said, “Head Librarian Devra Langsam has more experience than I do, and she was part of that investigation, too.”

“Ah,” said High Head Librarian Bistipherus Ownip, “but she wasn’t born out in the hinterland, as your records tell me you were.”

“I wasn’t born at sea!” She snapped her jaw closed. It didn’t matter. What mattered is that she wanted this assignment. She hardly knew whether she hoped for a rest from the endless chaos of work in a library or for an ironically hair-raising escapade.

Guess which one she gets.

If this excerpt amuses you, you might like the first Holly story, “By the Book”, FREE at Smashwords, or the novel (without, alas, Holly) FORCE OF HABIT, which is 99 cents at Amazon and Smashwords.

WRITING PROMPT: A character is given an assignment which turns out to be more complicated than expected.

MA

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If you’ve been reading this blog for a while, you may already have read this one when it was posted at the late, lamented Dark Valentine online magazine. Since Dark Valentine is no longer with us, I posted the first of the stories they published from me a couple of weeks ago, and the other one this week. As always, more free stories can be found on this here blog’s Free Reads page.

This one was is way creepy, so be warned.

Dry As Dust
by Marian Allen

Lisette had lost count of the men she had met at the pool, at the beach, on the river. This latest one, Hayden, she had run across at Cumberland Falls. She was alone, of course, and he was with his parents and their other grown children. It hadn’t been difficult to make eye contact with him, to giggle and flirt without his family interfering, to get his address and make a date.

His basement apartment was a bonus. She drew in a deep breath of damp and mold and licked her lips.

“It ain’t much,” Hayden said, opening the door to her. “May kept the house and I got the car. I wish you’d have let me pick you up at your place.”

“But I don’t have a place,” she said. “I’m a citizen of the world.”

“Yeah. Whatever. Say, how about a beer, before we take off?”

“Where are we going?”

“Uh…. Out to dinner?”

“I’d rather have something here.”

“Well…. I guess I could rustle something up. It won’t be anything special.”

“Yes, it will.” Lisette ran her hands up Hayden’s chest. “It will be very, very special.”

She pulled him to her and kissed him deeply. “Mmmm,” she crooned. “I’m parched.”

“I’ll get that beer.”

“I don’t want beer.”

“Oh, party girl!” He grinned, massaging her shoulders. “Whiskey for you, eh? Jack Daniels?”

Lisette shook her head. “I don’t want whiskey.” She wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed him again, smelling his sweat, tasting the wetness in his mouth. “I just want you. I just want you.”

His voice was hoarse when he said, “Let’s get down to business, then.”

“Oh, yes.”

He led her into the bedroom, but she had no intention of getting on the bed, where mattresses and bed linen would absorb her joy.

“Here,” she said.

“Like, on the floor, party girl?”

“Right here. Right here.”

He turned to face her, but she stepped away. She wanted to see his face. She plunged a crimson fingernail into the soft hollow at the base of Hayden’s throat. His eyes widened and glistened delectably as she opened him, clothes and all, from neck to abdomen. His viscera tumbled out, and all the lovely, lovely blood burst free, drenching her, coating her.

Hayden’s body collapsed on the floor, and Lisette sank down next to him, scooping up his life’s fluid and rubbing it on her body, in her hair. All too soon, the beautiful liquid coagulated and dried. She sopped the last of it from his interior with a handkerchief from one of the dresser drawer. Then, at last, it was gone. All gone.

With a sigh, Lisette pushed herself up and meandered, already nostalgic for the pleasure just past, into the bathroom. She stepped into the shower stall and turned on the taps. Blood , skin, hair, bone, clothes and flesh dissolved in the warm steam. Lisette returned to the water, and the only living things in the apartment were the flies on Hayden’s corpse.

Lisette had lost count of the men she had met at the pool, at the beach, on the river.

I did warn you.

WRITING PROMPT: A blind date or pick-up goes bad when the viewpoint character’s partner disapproves of the viewpoint character’s choice of food.

MA

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I’m also posting this at Quills & Quibbles. I seem to be all about romance. Must be the February in me.

Witch Woman
by Marian Allen

Everybody in town knew Mrs. Hatcher. My grandmother told stories about daring her brother to touch the old woman’s fence one Halloween back in the day.

So she’s the one I went to, when Luke dumped me.

I waited until after dark, so nobody would see me. Crept up onto the porch, with the boards creaking and squeaking under my shoes and knocked.

The door swung open and this tiny little skinny old wrinkled-up woman peeped up at me from under a wig of short blond curls. She was wearing blue jeans and a flannel shirt with a sparkly pin on the lapel.

“Yes?” Her voice was thin and high but snappy, like she had something better to do than answer the door. “I don’t want any Girl Scout cookies. They give me an allergy.”

“I’m not selling Girl Scout cookies.”

“What are you selling?” She tried to look around me. “Where are your parents? Children shouldn’t be out alone after dark these days.”

“I’m not a child. I’m almost thirteen.”

“Know how old I am?”

“No.”

“You can’t count that high. What do you want?”

Before I could chicken out, I said, “I want a love potion.”

“A what?”

“A love potion. My boyfriend broke up with me and I want him back.”

“Plenty of fish in the sea.” She started to closed the door.

“Please! I’m desperate!”

She must have heard the truth of that in my voice, because she opened the door again.

“Okay,” she said. “But I can’t give you a potion until you’re worthy. You have to go through a purification ritual.”

“Okay! Anything!”

“You have to get your hair cut, not just a little, but short, and take the clippings–”

“My hair’s always been long!”

She shrugged and stepped back, like she was about to close the door again.

“Okay, okay! Cut my hair. And do what with the clippings?”

“Bury them in your back yard, except for one or two hairs. Put them in your target’s yard or car or locker or notebook or somewhere close to him, yeah?”

“Okay.”

“File all the rough edges off your fingernails so they’re nice and smooth. Paint over ‘em so they’re all one color and you can’t see the pink and the white of ‘em.”

“Okay.”

“Come back here in a week.”

*   *   *   *

I went to the Clip & Tip the next day and got a cut and a manicure.

You should have been at school the day after that! Pandemonium! You’d have thought I’d had plastic surgery or something.

Luke wasn’t the only one who couldn’t stop staring at me, and I made sure he knew it, too.

I never did go back to Mrs. Hatcher.

I hope she wasn’t disappointed.

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This story originally appeared at the online magazine DARK VALENTINE which is, alas, no long with us.

The Prophecy of Te-Rahga

The doors of my Wisewoman sanctuary burst wide, chunks and splinters of their oaken bar clattering to the stone floor. Nala and Brinsi, my great-granddaughters and guards, drew their swords and stepped between the threat and the wrinkled shell my body had become.

Gonsheol strode in with a swirl of cape. Born the same village as I, in the same hour of the same year, he still looked in the prime of his life.

“So,” he said, smug power radiating from his strong body and vibrant voice, “after all these years, the prophecy ends unfulfilled.” He chuckled at Nala and Brinsi. “Tell them to sheath their swords, old woman. A good warrior knows when blades are useless.”

“Stand down,” I rasped, my voice worn to near-nothing by age and spell-casting.

My kinswomen stepped back, not at ease, but not on guard. They had been raised on the prophecy. We had spoken of it often, since the day when even I had to admit that time was eroding my strength with increasing speed.

“If I kill you, my power disappears,” Gonsheol said, knowing none of us needed reminding, “but, while you live, my power is incomplete. That time is nearly over. None can destroy me but you, and I’ve never allowed you close enough for long enough to do it.” He stepped nearer to the dais on which I sat. “Your sorcery is gone, is it not, old woman? Don’t bother to lie. You know I know.”

My head sank, eyes unable to bear the sight of him. My hands, no longer capable of sending forth the spells my voice could no longer sing, rested to either side of my woven mat. He was right. The only enchantment I could still do was a very small Stasis. It kept me upright when my body wanted to sag. It kept me awake all day and blissfully asleep all night. It kept me alive just a little longer.

“You’ve tried so often to get within spelling distance,” he said. “How is this? Is this close enough?” He approached me. Ten years ago, it would have been close enough for me to kill him. “This?” Two years ago, I could have paralyzed him at that distance. “This?” His knees almost touched the dais. My kinswomen tensed, gazes darting between the two of us.

“Throw him out,” I croaked.

They reached for his arms. He sang a brief phrase and did no more than flex his biceps. Their hands tugged, but his body gave not a hair’s-breadth.

You throw me out,” he taunted.

I didn’t want to. On the contrary.

Stasis is a small spell, quick and simple to sing. My voice quavered and my left hand shook as I laid my threadbare spell over his strong one, piggy-backing his into my control. My right hand shook as I drew a shortsword from beneath my mat.

“Never mock a prophecy,” I whispered.

WRITING PROMPT: A tiny bit of strength is used to great effect.

MA

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I think I posted this before on my old blog, but I don’t find it when I search this one, so here it is.I did post ABOUT it, and here’s a link to that post.

In my bio, I like to claim that I’ve been published on the wall of an Indian restaurant. I wrote this story in response to an exercise in which scent was the featured sense. When I had polished it, I printed it and had Charlie frame it, and I gave it to the manager at the Shalimar in Louisville on Hurstbourne Parkway. The next thing I knew, it was hanging on the wall in the waiting area and, if they haven’t taken it down, it is hanging there still.

Rose of Kashmir

by Marian Allen

I kept my eyes straight ahead, seeing suit-coat sleeves, shirt cuffs, broad hands, steering wheel, dashboard, hood, asphalt, car after car ahead. Eyes on the road was always a good idea on Hurstbourne, an eight-lane anthill at any hour. I had usually risked a happy glance to the side anyway, up to four months ago.

The Shalimar Indian Restaurant was what my glance had saluted: the best food in town, our special place. Dolores and I had met on the buffet line, had gone there on our first date — most dates — and back for all our wedding anniversaries. There had been ten of them before the blonde in my computer-users group got drunk and called me at home.

I tried not to remember Dolores’ face, puffed and red and shining with tears.

“I don’t know what I was thinking, Dodie. I was stupid. I’m sorry. I’m so sorry.”

But it hadn’t been enough. How could it be enough?

“I hope it was worth it!” Those had been her final words before she filled two suitcases and left our apartment. My apartment, suddenly.

Worth this loss? No, it had not been worth it.

Dolores’ mother knew where she was, but she wasn’t telling. I sent messages through her. There was no reply except to the most practical questions: Your summer clothes are in the spare room closet, the dentist is listed under Preventive Partners in the white pages.

“Tell her I love her. Tell her I’m sorry.”

“I will.”

~   ~   ~   ~   ~

Work that day was the same as work every day.

“How’s it goin’?”

“Fine.”

A.M., lunch I hardly tasted, P.M., back to the car, back onto Hurstbourne.

~   ~   ~   ~   ~

The drive home was grinding. Traffic glared and blared. A fender-bender somewhere ahead stalled me for half an hour within sight of the big yellow letters: SHALIMAR. I crawled past, radio tuned to a station playing music Dolores and I had never loved, while the ghosts of curry and hot mango chutney leaked into the car from my memory.

Still clinging to remembrance, I wasn’t surprised that the rich, exotic, familiar scents seemed to color the air of the apartment. So, when Dolores stepped out of the kitchenette, her wary face floating like a dream over a tray of steaming dishes, it took a moment for me to realize I wasn’t hallucinating.

She put the tray on the sideboard. “I… thought we should talk. Mom gave me your messages. I stopped by the Shalimar and got some carry-out….”

I should have been afraid to open my arms, I should have been ashamed, but the power of our past made me stupid. She came to me in a brief and awkward embrace.

Evening stretched into morning as we ate and talked and cried, a night that was painful the way setting a broken bone is painful.

When I die, I know I’ll go to heaven. It’ll be easy to find. It smells like basmati rice and chicken tikka masala.

WRITING PROMPT: Write a scene in which scent is the featured sense.

MA

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My sf/cop/farce FORCE OF HABIT is up at the Critters.org P&E poll for best sf/fantasy novel and for best mystery, I thought I’d give you another sample from it. So I will.

In this excerpt, amphibious siblings from the planet Gilhoo are on their way to question a woman from the planet Llannonn who has been mistakenly transported to the spaceship in place of Bel, who is missing on the planet. Tetra never uses contractions, because she’s found that humans tend to believe everything said by people who don’t use contractions.

“But, Tetra,” said Quatro Petrie. “Don’t you think you should have cleared it with the Captain before you told me all this? Sensitive, highly classified information–”

Ordinarily, Tetra refrained from interrupting Quatro’s speeches, preferring to let him drone on while she employed the time with thoughts of her own. But desperate times call for desperate measures, and she interrupted him now.

“Do you know what the students call you, Quatro? What everyone calls you, since someone came up with it in the corridor one day?”

“I’m not interested in the feeble jests of the semiliterate.”

After a step or two, Quatro asked, “What do they call me?”

“Pete the Clam,” said Tetra. “Because of your reticence. It is legendary. The Captain would not object to my telling you something she does not want spread around. And your assistance is required, not to say essential. Now, just do as I instructed you, and then you can get back to your cross-sectioning.”

The Gilhoolies were in sick bay. Tetra had dragooned Quatro immediately after leaving Captain Fazzaria in Clubroom locus B15.

“Dragooned” was the appropriate word: Tetra had taken Quatro to sick bay by way of the commissary. There, she had picked up two yards of gold bric-a-brac and a tube of quick-dry glue. Behind the closed doors of Dr. Vlador Frazni’s office, she had cut the bric-a-brac into strips of various lengths and glued the lengths to Quatro’s clothing.

“Remember,” she said. “Very soft-spoken. Very gentle. Restrained.”

“Should I smile?”

Quatro had a smile, which he practiced in front of a mirror, and used in the classroom when pointing out pupils’ deficiencies and flaws. He labored under the delusion that it put the students at ease.

Tetra had seen this smile, and had seen young persons whom it had stricken. “By all means,” she said.

Now she led Quatro to the quarantine rooms. She gave Batista his lines and had him change places with Antonioni.

Inside Freldt’s quarantine room, Batista pretended to wipe a dew of fear from his brow.

“I pity you,” he said.

Freldt looked up from her discviewer. She put the show on pause and took the translation plug out of her ear. She needed a break just now: Bambi stood at the edge the Big Meadow for the first time and the tension was nearly unbearable.

“The Captain has some questions and she wants some answers for them,” Batista said.

“No response,” Freldt said. “Don’t ask.”

“I’m not asking. It isn’t my job to ask. Asking is somebody else’s job.”

The door opened, and Quatro came in dressed in khaki trousers, now with gold bric-a-brac down the outside seams,  and a red turtleneck, now with gold trim around the neck and cuffs. He wore his favorite off-duty wig, one of short curls the color of weak apple-cinnamon tea. It set off the blue-green of his eyes, though he would have eaten worms before admitting such a thought ever occurred to him.

Batista shrank from him. “Quatro!”

“Leave the room,” said Quatro, very soft-spoken, very gentle, restrained.

“My orders–”

“Your orders are to leave the room, Ven,” said Quatro.

“Now leave, before I take the trouble to remember your name.” Quatro was no actor, and he spoke without inflection. The effect was chilling.

“She isn’t to be left alone.”

“But she won’t be alone, will she? I’ll be here to keep her company. I’m sure we’ll find something to occupy our time.”

And he smiled.

Batista left the room.

“No response,” said Freldt, with considerably less emphasis than before. “Don’t ask.”

Quatro only looked at her.

Freldt felt cold sweat popping out in places no sweat of any temperature had ever popped before.

“The Captain thinks you don’t answer our questions because you don’t understand Allesesperanto,” Quatro said. “Do you understand Allesesperanto?”

“Of course I do.”

“Good. I hate it when I get impatient with someone, and lose my temper, and then find out they simply didn’t understand the question. Especially when it’s too late for me to apologize.”

He crossed the room to Freldt and took the discviewer control out of her hand. She gave it up to him, avoiding his touch and scrunching away from him into the corner of her bed. He pressed a button, and the viewscreen went dark.

“A sad show,” Quatro said. “They kill his Mother.”

WRITING PROMPT: An innocuous character has to intimidate someone.

MA

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cedar
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I’m celebrating Christmas today, so I set this up early. Whatever you celebrate this season, or even if you don’t celebrate anything at all, I wish you the best of your tradition and mine all rolled up together.

A sestina is a 39-line poem relying on six end-of-line words to effect a sort of rhyme pattern. I cheated a little.

Cedar
by
Marian Allen

Thirty feet tall, eight-foot dripline–the shade
this cedar cast would make a hosta groan
for light.  And then, last winter, came a fall
of snow so plumply damp it weighed each branch
with diamond lead.  Below, our feet pressed
snow as gossamer and solid as a new-grown leaf.

Each needle of an evergreen–a cedar–is a leaf
pin-slender, massing an impenetrable shade.
The needles die and drop, turn orange-brown; pressed,
they crumble.  Wind-raked cedars sway and groan;
snow coats each brittle, close-packed branch–
clings there, given nowhere blank to fall.

An evergreen looks arrogant when fall
brightens, drains, and strips the broad-leaf
trees.  A cedar mocks the empty branch
of has-been maple.  An evergreen’s unyielding shade
chills the ground.  The final sigh, the groan
of the dying year, smells of cedar pressed

by frost, like quilts unfolded, wrinkles pressed
and cedar-scented, resurrected for the fall.
Just listen to the hinges of the old chest groan!
Lift out that picture album; turn back each leaf,
name the names you know, tell tales on every shade,
crawl back to history along your branch.

Now forward from the founding trunk, along the branch
that bore you, past the fragile flowers pressed
between the pages (roses and violets, both the same shade
of dust, both with the same faint tang).  Let the pages fall
behind them, layer the past upon petal, bud, and leaf;
come, at last, to yourself:  An infant.  A child.  Grown.

Last winter, we heard the cedar creak and groan
beneath its burden.  The trunk bent, parallel to branch.
Still the snow fell, accumulating leaf upon airy leaf–
icy mulch, trapped on the tree’s surfaces, it pressed
wood beyond endurance.  We watched the limbs fall
cracking, watched the trunk snap with just a shade

of pleasure, picturing leaf and bloom in summer, pressed
skyward, sunflowers grown where the gloom of branch
will now no longer fall; blossoms in the vacancy of shade.

WRITING PROMPT: Your main character opens a cedar chest in the attic of an old house. What’s inside? How does your character feel about it?

MA

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Please excuse the Twittified title, but I’m posting this early and I might not be able to retweet it with its hashtags on the day it goes up. It scares me a little that I understood what I just wrote, and it scares me even more that I’m not the only one.

ANYWAY, this poem appeared in the Southern Indiana Writers Group Christmas-themed anthology, CHRISTMAS BIZARRE, which is now out of print. The good news is, we have many new members to the group and we’re collecting stories from them set around other festivities. We’re going to retain the stories from the original anthology by members who are still … well … members, add the new stories, and reissue it in perfect-bound and electronically under the title HOLIDAY BIZARRE. “Bizarre” is not an unintentional misspelling of “bazaar”. You can trust me on that.

TRADITION
(with apologies to Ogden Nash)
by Marian Allen

I’ve never been able “to see

if reindeer really know how to fly,” but I know a Christmas tree

sure can.

All you have to do is take a man–

my husband, for example–

take him to the woods and let him trample

around in the snow, looking for the very best

tree he can find. Let the rest

of the family stay home where it’s warm, or let them come

and argue and call one another’s choices “dumb.”

Choose a tree that looks just the right

size for the room. I guarantee you that the height

of that tree will be at least two feet over,

a fact which you must let your man discover

before he takes the tree inside

so, while everybody else goes in for popcorn and hot chocolate, he can stay out on the porch and cut lengths off the trunk until the tree is less high than it is wide.

Then

let him in.

Next, your man must spend an hour looking in the basement for a tree stand and then you must find it in a minute in the attic.

Your man’s language will become emphatic.

Finally, let the tree not fit the stand, and let it lean once it’s whittled down to size, and let it fall over unless somebody’s holding it, and let everybody start fighting over what ornaments to use and how much tinsel, and let them all get mad and go to separate rooms declaring that they don’t care if the tree never gets decorated and, when all this has been done, open the back door and stand by.

That tree will fly.

Yes, it really happened. Yes, more than once. Hence the title.

WRITING PROMPT: How did each of your parents deal with the logistics of holidays? How did each of their parents?

Hope your holidays are sweet with memories and warm with your love for others.

MA

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One year, I did what I called Shorts in Season, during which I wrote one new flash fiction piece every three months. Ha! Slacker!

Anyway, the long version of this story is here. Here is a 50-word version I tried out:

Final Delivery
by Marian Allen

Dead end job. This box, then I send a tiny lead express package to my brain.

“Sign here.”

She dances on the gravel, grey braids flopping, house shoes flapping.

“It came! It came!”

The day ends with a beer, not a bullet. A black wreath doesn’t suit Father Christmas.

WRITING PROMPT: Does the micro story capture the essence of the “longer” story? Experiment with finding the “heart” of classic stories. of your stories.

MA

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